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Well since Aspy quit we had to start a new story. So this is where it will start. You can use your same characters
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Watch Your Step
Haskins- Posts : 7
Join date : 2009-07-26
Raven had no idea where she was. Her mother was running away from- wait, what was it called? She couldn't remember. . . it was some sort of, large animal. The wind was making her shiver. Raven would do anything if she was with her mother, again. She missed her more than anything. Was she all right? Did she get caught by- that, animal? A few tears fell on the ground when she thought of that.
How did I get here? Raven thought, as she had a flashback of her Mother and all of the other horses running for their lives. This place is horrible! No food, water, nothing! Not even life. . . She let out a sob.
Raven was so tired from running. She trotted over to a tree that was a few feet away from here and layed down. She was so tired, but thought if she went to sleep, she wouldn't wake up.
The foal shrugged, anything is better than here.Her eyes slowly shut.
The sky was the color of baby blue. There was one or two clouds in the sky, but it made the scenery even more beautiful. Leaves were blowing gently. A horse with a black coat looked up at the sun. He had to admit the land he found was beautiful, and wouldn't trade it for anything.
"You found a perfect spot," A white mare said to the black stallion. "You sure know how to make a horse happy."
The black stallion smiled. "I'm glad you like it. We've only been here a month, but It feels like we've been here for years, don't you think?"
"Yes," The mare nodded,"I even think little,Raven, loves it to! Look at her playing with Jane. When we were back in our old land, they never said a word to each other."
The black stallion was about to say something, but his ears pointed up. "Grab the foals, quick! I smell an enemy, near by!"
The white mare's eyes went wide. She galloped over to Raven and Jane. "Stay beside me. No where, else!"
"What's happening?" Raven's voice was shaky.
The black stallion neighed loudly so that every horse could hear. Everyone looked up at him, then lead the way out of the danger. This was a nightmare.
Everybody was running so fast, Raven's eyesight was getting blurry. It was hard for her to tell where she was going. When she looked on the side of her, she couldn't see her mother or her friend, Jane.
When she was exhausted from running, her legs stopped. She realized that she has been following dirt blowing in the wind the whole time. Where were the horses? Where was the nice grass she has been standing on a few minutes ago? Or has it been hours? Maybe even days!
When Raven woke up, she choked. Her throat hurt when she swallowed. Suddenly, she felt something weird picking at her legs and stomach. It tickled a little, but when she realized what it was, it didn't tickle anymore. "Get off!" She screamed in terror, jumping up on her four hooves.
Raven fell back down. She had no energy left.
When the annoying, black birds, realized that she was alive they flew away quickly.
How did I get here? Raven thought, as she had a flashback of her Mother and all of the other horses running for their lives. This place is horrible! No food, water, nothing! Not even life. . . She let out a sob.
Raven was so tired from running. She trotted over to a tree that was a few feet away from here and layed down. She was so tired, but thought if she went to sleep, she wouldn't wake up.
The foal shrugged, anything is better than here.Her eyes slowly shut.
The sky was the color of baby blue. There was one or two clouds in the sky, but it made the scenery even more beautiful. Leaves were blowing gently. A horse with a black coat looked up at the sun. He had to admit the land he found was beautiful, and wouldn't trade it for anything.
"You found a perfect spot," A white mare said to the black stallion. "You sure know how to make a horse happy."
The black stallion smiled. "I'm glad you like it. We've only been here a month, but It feels like we've been here for years, don't you think?"
"Yes," The mare nodded,"I even think little,Raven, loves it to! Look at her playing with Jane. When we were back in our old land, they never said a word to each other."
The black stallion was about to say something, but his ears pointed up. "Grab the foals, quick! I smell an enemy, near by!"
The white mare's eyes went wide. She galloped over to Raven and Jane. "Stay beside me. No where, else!"
"What's happening?" Raven's voice was shaky.
The black stallion neighed loudly so that every horse could hear. Everyone looked up at him, then lead the way out of the danger. This was a nightmare.
Everybody was running so fast, Raven's eyesight was getting blurry. It was hard for her to tell where she was going. When she looked on the side of her, she couldn't see her mother or her friend, Jane.
When she was exhausted from running, her legs stopped. She realized that she has been following dirt blowing in the wind the whole time. Where were the horses? Where was the nice grass she has been standing on a few minutes ago? Or has it been hours? Maybe even days!
When Raven woke up, she choked. Her throat hurt when she swallowed. Suddenly, she felt something weird picking at her legs and stomach. It tickled a little, but when she realized what it was, it didn't tickle anymore. "Get off!" She screamed in terror, jumping up on her four hooves.
Raven fell back down. She had no energy left.
When the annoying, black birds, realized that she was alive they flew away quickly.
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So this was his new home for now. Outcast walked along quickly, sore from yesterday. From the fight. He had taken a hard blow to his shoulder, his hind left hock was swollen from where his father's sharp hoof had struck it, and his right ear was ripped from where the larger stallion had dug in and tore it with his teeth. Outcast had seen it happened to his brothers, and knew it would happen to him. When the colts started to rebel against their father's rule, he drove them out. One by one.
Now Outcast walked these barren lands with no particular purpose. He knew eventually he would like to return to claim a herd of his own, but for now he was enjoying the freedom of finally being independent. Of course, it wouldn't hurt to have some company...
Now Outcast walked these barren lands with no particular purpose. He knew eventually he would like to return to claim a herd of his own, but for now he was enjoying the freedom of finally being independent. Of course, it wouldn't hurt to have some company...
Haskins- Posts : 7
Join date : 2009-07-26
It was too dark to see inside the cave, but when Raven squinted her eyes, she could see a little light at the end of the tunnel. What could be there? She thought, as she slowly stepped through the cold cave. The rocks underneath her were digging through her hooves. They tickled her so she giggled. Why didn't it hurt?
Raven had to admit that it was much cooler inside the cave than outside. Which was odd because aren't the insides of caves supposed to be hotter than outside the caves? She shook her head, trying to forget about that thought.
The horse stopped walking for a minute. There was an a sound that was echoing. It kind of sounded like something was falling. Not too long after Raven thought that, there was a loud splash. The another.
What's that? The filly thought, as she heard it again and again. It was a familiar sound. The noise reminded her of back home, when her mother had taken her to the river to get some water every so often. It was surrounded by flowers of all colors. When Raven thought of her home again, she had another flashback like the one before.
Raven had to admit that it was much cooler inside the cave than outside. Which was odd because aren't the insides of caves supposed to be hotter than outside the caves? She shook her head, trying to forget about that thought.
The horse stopped walking for a minute. There was an a sound that was echoing. It kind of sounded like something was falling. Not too long after Raven thought that, there was a loud splash. The another.
What's that? The filly thought, as she heard it again and again. It was a familiar sound. The noise reminded her of back home, when her mother had taken her to the river to get some water every so often. It was surrounded by flowers of all colors. When Raven thought of her home again, she had another flashback like the one before.
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